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A Trace
Thinking back of joyful memories, from the start,
Never leaving you, shattering your heart.
Retiring at night, with them right in your soul,
Waking up in the morning, still taking their toll.
Each day passes, thinking of yesterday,
Feelings of disbelief, will they ever go away?
Wonder what made this happen, was it your fault?
Tears roll down your face, hoping they'll halt.
Walls melting down that were solid as ice,
Unconditional love, once peaceful and nice.
Sharing stories and secrets of your lives history,
Putting them all together, so they won’t be a mystery.
Building the bond of honesty and trust with each other,
Anticipating, that it will last forever.
Feeling the love, soon turning to a frown,
Slipping away, as you fall to the ground.
Could it be it was all just a race?
Knowing someone had your heart; it's the end of the chase.
Memories of once was, won't ever erase,
Only reflections of yesterday, will just be a trace.
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| November 1, 2006, 07:17 |
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kinkykev
44 / male
Sussex, England, UK
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Re: A Trace
Lovely words, tica. 
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| November 1, 2006, 07:34 |
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azcapt
63 / male
phoenix, Arizona, US
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Re: A Trace
very well said---for those that understand, as I do
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| November 1, 2006, 16:47 |
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Tungmeister
54 / male
Miller Beach, Indiana, US
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Re: A Trace
Beautifully written Tica and anyone over 30 who has put some reasonable & quality time into their life and has experienced sincere reflection on "what might have been" must feel and relate to much of that. 
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| November 1, 2006, 17:15 |
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Re: A Trace
that's a terrific piece tica...it really draws the reader in...what a way to convey the life transition of a love...now gone or forever changed from what it was initially..joy, pain, and sorrow with a hint of regret perhaps...
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| November 15, 2006, 11:13 |
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firegalhotguy
34 / female
New Bedford, Massachusetts, US
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Re: A Trace
tica so nice said
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| November 20, 2006, 19:10 |
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Re: A Trace
Very well put. Some of us just hope that is not too late. That with alot of hard work, that all can be salvaged and a new chapter be written.
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| November 22, 2006, 12:15 |
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Re: A Trace
QUOTE (ticaD @ November 1, 2006, 07:17)Thinking back of joyful memories, from the start,
Never leaving you, shattering your heart.
Retiring at night, with them right in your soul,
Waking up in the morning, still taking their toll.
Each day passes, thinking of yesterday,
Feelings of disbelief, will they ever go away?
Wonder what made this happen, was it your fault?
Tears roll down your face, hoping they'll halt.
Walls melting down that were solid as ice,
Unconditional love, once peaceful and nice.
Sharing stories and secrets of your lives history,
Putting them all together, so they won’t be a mystery.
Building the bond of honesty and trust with each other,
Anticipating, that it will last forever.
Feeling the love, soon turning to a frown,
Slipping away, as you fall to the ground.
Could it be it was all just a race?
Knowing someone had your heart; it's the end of the chase.
Memories of once was, won't ever erase,
Only reflections of yesterday, will just be a trace.
damn tica it definitely hit the nail on the head with that damn girl u r so deep and i have gained gr8 knowledge from it keep up all the good feelings and maybe we will see eachother again bye 
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| November 24, 2006, 01:58 |
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ticaD
50 / female
T.C.F.W....F.Y., Pennsylvania, US
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Re: A Trace
QUOTE (ticaD @ November 1, 2006, 07:17)Thinking back of joyful memories, from the start,
Never leaving you, shattering your heart.
Retiring at night, with them right in your soul,
Waking up in the morning, still taking their toll.
Each day passes, thinking of yesterday,
Feelings of disbelief, will they ever go away?
Wonder what made this happen, was it your fault?
Tears roll down your face, hoping they'll halt.
Walls melting down that were solid as ice,
Unconditional love, once peaceful and nice.
Sharing stories and secrets of your lives history,
Putting them all together, so they won’t be a mystery.
Building the bond of honesty and trust with each other,
Anticipating, that it will last forever.
Feeling the love, soon turning to a frown,
Slipping away, as you fall to the ground.
Could it be it was all just a race?
Knowing someone had your heart; it's the end of the chase.
Memories of once was, won't ever erase,
Only reflections of yesterday, will just be a trace.
Thought I would revisit this poem I wrote, this is one of my favorites. 
tica...
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stevanos
49 / male
A place in SW, British Columbia, Canada
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Re: Re: A Trace
QUOTE (ticaD @ May 8, 2008, 15:29) QUOTE (ticaD @ November 1, 2006, 07:17)Thinking back of joyful memories, from the start,
Never leaving you, shattering your heart.
Retiring at night, with them right in your soul,
Waking up in the morning, still taking their toll.
Each day passes, thinking of yesterday,
Feelings of disbelief, will they ever go away?
Wonder what made this happen, was it your fault?
Tears roll down your face, hoping they'll halt.
Walls melting down that were solid as ice,
Unconditional love, once peaceful and nice.
Sharing stories and secrets of your lives history,
Putting them all together, so they won’t be a mystery.
Building the bond of honesty and trust with each other,
Anticipating, that it will last forever.
Feeling the love, soon turning to a frown,
Slipping away, as you fall to the ground.
Could it be it was all just a race?
Knowing someone had your heart; it's the end of the chase.
Memories of once was, won't ever erase,
Only reflections of yesterday, will just be a trace.
Thought I would revisit this poem I wrote, this is one of my favorites.
tica...
Awesome poem...I really like it...was it from a real life experience? because I had an experience just like it. Keep it up! well if you don't I will. just teasing...good job 
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