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Okie dokie. I want to contribute to this forum and keep it going. I know I'm not the only one who ventures in here every day and reads stuff over again (poetry, essays, etc.). I've decided to run a little contest of my own! Of course, I hope this is ok with abs. If not, feel free to delete everything I've worked so hard to type *sniff* ... hehe....... Anyhow.....
I want people to write a poem, short story, song  , anything original right here in this topic. And it damn well better be original! Just think of me as Robert De Niro in "Meet The Fockers." You have to earn your way into the circle of trust, and if you submit somebody else's work, I'll find out! I have my ways 
Now, onto the prize. It's not much and this topic is probably doomed to fail...... I give it half a day..... but I would hope that y'all would help me keep it going... for the sake of us "writer's corner" fans! The first prize winner will be added to my naughty list for a period of time (haven't decided how long, yet).
Go on, give it a try! What could it hurt 
Warning!
If the winner decides they want to save my pictures in any way, shape, or form, I will hunt them down like the perverted sonuvabitch they are and beat the livin' shit out of 'em!  Trust me, I'll find you!!
Thank you and have a nice day! 
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| June 9, 2006, 08:23 |
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Do we just post it right here in this lil' ole text box?
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| June 9, 2006, 09:18 |
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Yes Sir....
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| June 9, 2006, 09:19 |
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Okay, well, I'll post a short story I wrote not long ago once I give it a look over to make sure it is good enough for your viewing pleasure. 
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| June 9, 2006, 09:22 |
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heretopleaseyou
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the age for love
too young to be in love they say
too young to know the score,
when we come to the age for love,
that's what i'm waiting for.
we know our love will pass the test,
if we could have the chance,
well,any age is the age for love,
the age for sweet romance
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| June 9, 2006, 09:44 |
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| June 9, 2006, 09:52 |
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| June 9, 2006, 09:54 |
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| June 9, 2006, 09:55 |
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| June 9, 2006, 09:55 |
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Wow, it was only 9 pages double spaced but it took quite a few posts (limit is 5,000 characters per text chunk here). I hope it all got sent correctly, I believe nothing got messed up in the posting of it here.
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| June 9, 2006, 09:56 |
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heretopleaseyou
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just as your whole body has a little nerve end centered at the tip of your finger, which is exploring and which contibutes to the sense of touch, you are just such a little nerve end for everything that is going on. just as the eyes serve the whole body, you serve the entire universe. you are a function of all that is.
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| June 9, 2006, 10:27 |
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Great job, both of you!
Keep 'em comin'!
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| June 9, 2006, 13:38 |
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apinchbetter46
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Kenner, Louisiana, US
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BEAUTY IN THE BREAKDOWN...hope everyone likes it
come on take a step toward me
so you can figure me out
ive been hoping and praying for one single way
to show you what im all about
and i know...
and i know..this is the only way of pleasing the crowd
but when this is over and on with it we walk away there can be no doubts
so lets get a little closer now
so lets get a little closer now
COURUS
you say
that we're all tied up and wrapped around it and useless
useless
states of mind
but at the same time we're still young
we had the time to realize the we were wrong
come on just run with me
get the hell out of this town so we can get a better feel for each other
ill take u back to
when you remembered how we used to
just live your life a little for me
take the time to let it go
step away and watch me grow
so lets get a little closer now
so lets get a little closer now
COURUS
you say
that we're all tied up and wrapped around it and useless
useless
states of mind
but at the same time we're still young
we had the time to realize the we were wrong
you can stay if you want to
and id write to you and tell you how uve always been so special to me
you can stay if u want to and ill try
you can stay if you want to
and id write to you and tell you how uve always been so special to me
you can stay if u want to and ill try
to keep u close to me
to keep u close to me
to keep you close to me.......
COURUS
you say
that we're all tied up and wrapped around it and useless
useless
states of mind
but at the same time we're still young
we had the time to realize the we were wrong
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| June 9, 2006, 14:36 |
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This is gonna be a hard choice to make!
MORE! MORE! 
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| June 9, 2006, 14:40 |
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apinchbetter46
39 / male
Kenner, Louisiana, US
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howd u like moon?
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| June 9, 2006, 14:42 |
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heretopleaseyou
58 / male
wilkes-barre, Pennsylvania, US
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the flower
I stare in astonishment
at the GREAT beauty
of a small thing
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| June 9, 2006, 21:33 |
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heretopleaseyou
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what is reality? people have various theories about what it is. But it is important to remember that they are all theories. those who beleive that reality is material are projecting upon the world a certain philosophical theory about it. and those who say that it is mental or spiritual are doing likewise.
reality itself is neither mental or spiritual, nor any other concept that we have of it. reality is simply the PRESENT MOMENT.
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| June 11, 2006, 15:39 |
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QUOTE (apinchbetter46 @ June 9, 2006, 14:42)howd u like moon?
Me liked
And since this topic is goin' to hell in a hand basket like I thought it would, I'm gonna do something totally different.
Thanks, guys! 
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| June 13, 2006, 14:24 |
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funlovingpair
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Frozen Tundra, Minnesota, US
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QUOTE (MoonHowler @ June 13, 2006, 14:24) QUOTE (apinchbetter46 @ June 9, 2006, 14:42)howd u like moon?
Me liked
And since this topic is goin' to hell in a hand basket like I thought it would, I'm gonna do something totally different.
Thanks, guys!
OH sure there ya go changing the rules on me. I had real nice story about what I would do to you, but now you don't even care, *all teary eyed*, I just don't know if I can go on any more, get a guy's hopes up and then ya just shoot them right down. What a cruel woman ya are.
Hey I had to say something.
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| June 13, 2006, 16:28 |
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apinchbetter46
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so who's the winner?0
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| June 14, 2006, 12:06 |
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All of you!
Including you two, flp..... just 'cause I like y'all so damn much! 
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| June 14, 2006, 13:22 |
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just4urplsur
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what about me???????
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| June 14, 2006, 19:03 |
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QUOTE (just4urplsur @ June 14, 2006, 19:03)what about me???????
Someone has to be #1 in my book, don't they? 
Now, where's your submission??
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| June 15, 2006, 08:04 |
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just4urplsur
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QUOTE (MoonHowler @ June 15, 2006, 08:04)
my submission is every time I am near you!!!!!!
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| June 15, 2006, 21:23 |
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| June 19, 2006, 13:38 |
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I'm adding you just because you included Waylon Jennings!!! 
Who've you been talkin' to? *raises an eyebrow*
You brought back some memories with that one... thanks!
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| June 19, 2006, 14:28 |
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| June 19, 2006, 14:40 |
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Okay Moon...I'm lazy...please consider my post in "Alone" section...hehee
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| June 19, 2006, 16:32 |
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HI MOon so finaly I made it in here.
so my entry, here goes.
Roses, thorns
They surround you
Protecting you.
Your beauty surpasses them,
Sunlight shie in your skin
Soft,
Silk like
Gently I remove the protection
and free you
Kiss you
Love you
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| August 3, 2006, 10:12 |
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azcapt
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Ok moon I am also lazy--quote my post in writers corner---called together again as my entry. Submitted around July 27/28... 
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| August 9, 2006, 23:33 |
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hi moon its me sky27a my account got canceled so i made a new one. can u add me agian to ur buddie list?
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